I usually write poems when my feelings are more than I can handle. These are some of my old poems…
This particular one was written in a confused and betrayed state of my mind…
SOMEONE SAID….
Someone said…
There’s time for laughter and time for tears…
So when we walk down the aisle of life
We take back the memories of the years….
True… so true…
But what if the aisle of life
Is halved without a strife?
What if your time for laughter
Yet to come, is in for a slaughter?
What if autumn so suddenly interceeds spring?
When the leaves of memories begin to fall
And you realise there’s no one to answer your call
When life gives itself less time
And all you can hear is the wind chime…
When your hand reaches out for comfort
And can feel no one when really hurt…
When the belief of your heart is torn
And when you’ve taken all the trouble you could’ve borne…
When no one seems to feel your pain
And you feel there’s nothing you’ve gained…
Then…
You realise how wrong you were
To believe in things and people, that actually never care
To hope for love to come from somewhere
To have some sympathy in the air
At least when life laid itself so bare….
But I think tears will sting the eye
When they bid goodbye….
Thebeanbagpoet
Guru Dutt reprised.
This is a dukh bhari dastaan but enjoyable. 🙂
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THANKU ANNA;)
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To hope for love to come from somewhere…..
So true
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Really nice.. Keep posting. Wish to read those.
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Thats a grt start. All the best dear.
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Thank you for your support and feedback
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Blame the Almighty
Blame the Stars… But live on full on!!!
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true!!
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Nicely written…But there is a change of tone in the last line “you” becomes “I”…Is this intentional?
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❤
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Ah the Poet Awakens again!!
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yes indeed
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I simply loved this one! Strikes a cord instantly 🙂 Keep rocking girl..way to go!!!
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So nice n so true….just luved it…kp going ashu…
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Thanku dear. It means a lot to me that u all are taking the time to read and comment on these poems.
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Bayankar dukhi kahaani unable to digest but dats d truth can’t run away.. keep gng.. looking fwd..
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Thanku re.
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A person’s pain and desperation so aptly described! Good going,Ashu! Loved it!
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thanku awkward girl. will visit u soon.
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beautiful ..
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